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short film Mary Says Goodnight
Hey guys, I posted my first short film here recently and figured Id post my 2nd short film which I just finished. It's called Mary Says Goodnight. I hope some people will check it out.
http://youtu.be/QvIpm9Shfrg 
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01-01-2016, 02:27 PM
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Not a bad 2nd offering
Pros Liked the B&W Lighting was consistent Actress did a good job Cons Run time Some scenes went on a bit too long (stirring glass, pouring liquor, counting pills etc) Some of the shots were shadowy The payoff didnt have any umpf to it I think when you have a slow buildup like this film you have to have a payoff worth the run time. Keep it going, I look forward to more.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWPwyW_A7xc Recent Movie Watches Back to the Future 3 7/10 Predator 9/10 Terminator 5 7/10
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