Go Back   Horror.com Forums - Talk about horror. > Horror, But Not Movies > Books & Fiction Writing
Register FAQ Community Calendar

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 05-29-2010, 03:40 PM
ckhoffmanf
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Cool My book for FREE just want opinions!! (Pretty please?)

Serious horror fans, I am recruiting you to download a free copy of my horror story. It's episode #1 in the series, so there are what seems to be "plot holes". Rest assured, all questions are answered in upcoming episodes.

Just looking for some honest feedback. Nothing more. 100% free for everyone, forever :)
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 05-31-2010, 01:12 PM
ckhoffmanf
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
guess nobody is interested :(:o:(
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 05-31-2010, 01:50 PM
neverending's Avatar
neverending neverending is offline
Cranky

 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 12,416
Give me time... I'll try and get to it.
__________________
Lee Widener, Author Website

Cartoon Artwork, Underground Art, Other Weird Stuff
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 05-31-2010, 03:36 PM
endo's Avatar
endo endo is offline
Evil Dead
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Isle of Lucy
Posts: 548
Got an actual link to it? I've copied and pasted both links you had and they take me everywhere but to the story.
I'd like to read it and give feedback, if I could find it.:)
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 05-31-2010, 05:19 PM
ckhoffmanf
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
oh. sorry. The link is in my siggy. :)


http://www.lulu.com/ckhoffmanf

the download version of the only book listed is free.

Sorry about the confusion. I hope everyone likes it. Currently working on the finishing touches for episode two
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 06-11-2010, 08:40 PM
GeraldRice GeraldRice is offline
Little Boo
 
Join Date: Jun 2010
Posts: 3
You should probably post the plot here. By your subject matter alone some people will or won't be interested. Tease us. Titillate us. Don't just lay down and tell us to get it over with.
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 06-22-2010, 03:47 PM
CJ Steak's Avatar
CJ Steak CJ Steak is offline
Scary car guy...
 
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Hutto, Near Austin, TX
Posts: 101
Chelsea!

Your story was badass!!

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!

Aside from a few words being used incorrectly due to spell check, I didn't see anything really wrong with it. An example is "food" instead of "foot". :) Nothing a quick double check won't fix.

Best of luck to you and your writing. If you have more books in this series, please post them here so I can read more.

-Chris
__________________
I dig scary cars.
Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 04:51 PM.