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02-12-2009, 11:03 AM
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The first eight minutes of CLOWN on Youtube
I'm the writer/direcctor of a little horror film called CLOWN. The DVD goes on sale tomorrow through HighRoad Entertainment, and I'm excited to say, about damn time. Anyway, just as we've received great reviews for the film, I just want to promote it like everyone likes to promote their films. So without further adieu, please go check out the first eight minutes of Clown on Youtube, leave a comment, rate it, whatever, all I'm asking. The full-featured DVD will be released tomorrow exclusively through www.theclownmovie.net. Thank you for your support!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GmuXDWUyyr0:D 
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02-12-2009, 01:52 PM
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Well, not bad. Interesting start. The dialogue between the two guys is boring. Ingeneral I'd like to see more variety in shot selection, particularly in the car, but not bad for a no budget effort.
You get extra points for your honest approach here in the forum. Thanks for being honest about who you are. I wish you good luck on this release.
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Lee Widener, Author Website  Cartoon Artwork, Underground Art, Other Weird Stuff 
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02-12-2009, 01:56 PM
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Thank you for your positive critque. I can assure you that not all of the dialogue is that stale, in fact out of the whole film, the first exchange between the "Lewis" and "Mark" characters are my least favourite. Thank you again for your input!
-Robbie
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02-20-2009, 10:35 AM
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Not bad. I love the tagline..."You can't have slaughter without laughter"
Are you releasing it yourself?
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