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My Poem
I Entered this in a Contest and i won $500!!
My heart bleeds my eyes weep look at what youve done to me Do you have any mercy? Do you even have a heart? Everything is gone My World has fallen apart The days go by slow The nights seem to last forever Sometimes i wish id never met you I wish we were never together You took the breath right out of me You shattered my heart on the ground You used and abused me Is it in your blood to let everyone down? But what has happened is over and done Your evil and cold What have you become?
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Very good, I liked it a lot.
(On a personal and somewhat sad note the used and abused line reminded me of Fern Gulley...)
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Short lines, direct, no frills. I like. If it was set to music, it would fit right into the best Cure album
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