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10-05-2005, 06:23 AM
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Poetry Is A Form Of Art...Right?
I can't remember what I did with my other poems here...So, anyway...
This is something I just did....I don't really expect it to be very good, especially technically....It was just something I needed to tell someone... Dead And Buried Some people are stubborn, They don't know when to quit, When will they learn, To stop stirring the shit? When you know that it's over, Pack your things and move on, You never deserved to know her, So you're just back where you belong You lie, cheat and destroy, Killing everything you touch, You give false hope and fake joy, Fantasy shouldn't hurt so much You'll never be real, The truth wont be discovered, Until you learn how to feel, The suffering that you cause to others Everything's all about you, You can't see outside of yourself, All the selfish things you do, Just end up hurting someone else When you have killed it all, You reach into your grave, You pull out old dead memories, To see what can be saved Dead things can't create new life, But you just keep on trying, When you are dead inside, Everything around you, just keeps dying You have no conscience, You have no heart or soul, One day all of your deception, Will begin to take its toll You'll eventually be found out, All your lies will be exposed, Everyone will know what you're all about, Then you will truly be alone You can only use people for so long, You can only fool them until they open their eyes, When you turn around and they're gone, You really shouldn't be so surprised Don't be sad, when you can no longer see or hear her, You'll end up with your true love and things will all work out, One day when everyone else is gone you'll look in the mirror, And into the eyes of the only person you ever really cared about Until then... Just lay back, close your eyes, and rest your head Be silent, be still, because...You are dead
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...  If you can't dazzle 'em with brilliance...Baffle 'em with bullshit My Karma ran over my Dogma God WAS my co-pilot...But, we crashed in the mountains and...I had to eat him I'm suffocating in what's become of me... The rancid remains of what I used to be 
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10-05-2005, 06:43 AM
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10-05-2005, 06:50 AM
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It will really strike the heart of women who have been in an abusive relationship,because you totally nailed the 'narcissistic sociopath' that these men are.
It could go both ways actually because there are men in such relationships as well.But I cannot speak for men,and won't. It would make a kick-ass song. That's why it was powerful to me personally...it just got to the core of that type of person.
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10-05-2005, 07:09 AM
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OH...And, a couple people have asked, so I wanna clear this up... No, it is NOT about Dustin (my guy is ALL real *is so lucky*) It's about.... Last night, my 5foot5, little baby girl put down an ass-whippin' on her 6foot4 ex (they were together for over 2 years, and engaged to be married next May, till Seri found out that he was trying to get a little side action from a girl he used to be with 4 years ago...He figured that since the girl declined the request, he really didn't do anything wrong...Ass)......When his newest ex (a girl that he dumped 2 weeks ago, after he used her for 2 months, while he was still begging Seri to come back to him) showed up at OUR house looking for him....Well, of course he was here, because he's STILL trying to suck up to Seri... Anyway...Seri and his ex talked....Seri confronted him about all the bullshit, cuz it turns out he was at the NEW ex's house, the night before last, trying to get some from her, while he was waiting to see if Seri was ever going to take him back (which I keep telling him will NEVER happen...THAT'S the point I was trying to get across).......Anyway, Seri was beyond pissed, she doesn't usually get into fights, but she really wailed on him, and I couldn't really blame her.....He left here, holding onto his head, and crying:rolleyes: ....And 'new ex girl' got in a swing, too...heh I just don't want it to happen again... Since it was all so personal, I didn't really stop to think that you're right, Novakru...There are SOOO many guys like him....It's really quite common...
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... If you can't dazzle 'em with brilliance...Baffle 'em with bullshit My Karma ran over my Dogma God WAS my co-pilot...But, we crashed in the mountains and...I had to eat him I'm suffocating in what's become of me... The rancid remains of what I used to be
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10-06-2005, 11:22 AM
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Re: Understood
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If you're interested, I can try to locate them... Honestly, I don't really care for this one a whole lot...The one in my sig is one of my personal favorites, and I wrote one called 'Dark Angel' that I actually like most of all:)
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10-06-2005, 02:50 PM
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Re: good
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Some Of My Poems There are also two things in there that are not poems...You can just ignore those :)
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