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			Absolutely no offense taken.  If the book comes across long winded I need to know that.  Ill have to find places to cut it down.  Mind you, I still have about 15 chapters to add.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			Thanks. I'm writer too. Not an author yet, but hopefully I will be.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			Yeah, seems to be a hard world.  Luckily its kind of my side thing.  I submitted to a couple of agents last week, now the waiting game.  Im hoping to draw some feedback from them if anything.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			Hope people still enjoy sci fi because that what I am writing.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			I love sci-fi as long as its kind of gory... unfortunately if blood doesn't cover the walls I lose interest.  The only clean sci-fi I ever really got into was "The Dark Tower" from Stephen King.  Love that shit!
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			You've lost interest. I'm the H.G. Wells type. :[
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			as an english graduate and an avid reader i found the sentence structures very basic and regimented, the content varied but felt repetetive. thats just me, and one opinion is not everyones, but im always honest and say what i think.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			It's ok, we can't all love everything. I would still read your work for supports sake.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			I appreciate that vamp. That's what I need. I have no clue what I'm actually doing so comments like that help me figure out the details. I'll work on it.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			I like gory stuff just never had the nack of writing it. So I just started writing what I knew best.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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