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lmao

Delicious burbon
Finest of all the spirits
a drunken haiku

could we have one about a cat named putt putt

people always take shit out of context.

yep yep!

thanks!

have a safe and happy new year.

That's cool of you to stand up for a "n00b" like that, trip:p

This girl here is a good friend of mine, and I think she's an awesome poet...and if her poems seem a bit dark, she has every right to write them that way. It's not like she was posting a fucking suicide note in here.

I like 'em for the most part, as for the issue of how dark they are...well, that's my favorite kind, so do what you do.

I'm a nut...

"...people need the wood..."

hehe...

*blushes cuz you said "wood"*

lol

hmmm or maybe I'm personally sick of hearing kids cry out for attention when ones who do need it end up dead because it wasn't seen in the first place since they didn't take the drama route ? Yeah. I'd say that was pretty safe bet. Maybe your friends were replaceable to you and you were able to "get over it" like it was a lost football game, but I will never get over that loss. Know why ? My friend wasn't old or sickly or killed off in some unforseeable accident that happens every day. It was quite obviously pre-meditated. I will never "get over it" and let it be known. Obviously WEF read my post on it before I pulled it and you decided to jump in on whatever vendetta you have with me (which obviously raised it's head during the babygurl20 pic threads) from the only part that was quoted.
I apologize to WEF if I jumped up on the soapbox, but I don't take to the subject matter lightly. We all have bad days and I wanted you to think before you did somthing stupid.
As for you, Trippin, I still only have small clues as to what your problems with me are from mutual friends on here (assuming you think any of the Nine stuff is true), but you're more than welcome to throw down with me on here any time you like as I've stated before. Act like a punk and I'll treat you like one to everyone's amusement. And I will make it a lot more amusing than any pic of your tiny contribution to anatomy being posted everywhere :D
CK

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shut off your internal filters...never try to second guess an audience.you have talent,but you gotta let loose.



don't hold anything back when you opt for this subject matter(or any other),true or not.

I wasn't trying to cry out for attention. I didn't even have a reason to. I wrote it in poetry class. My teacher asked me if there were problems at home and I replied with a no because there wasn't any problems at all. That is just what happened. Come on now. Are you that stupid that you can't understand a simple sentence? Let me say it again...

I... WASN'T... TRYING... TO... KILL... MYSELF... OR... GET... ATTENTION... I... JUST... LIKE... TO... WRITE... POETRY!

thanks again.

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I get blocked a lot now days. It is easier for me to write when I'm depressed but, I haven't been that way in a year. (didn't realize its been that long)

Thank you for your comments.

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Okayyy, that's enough. I think when most people write personal poetry it is well...personal. Not that you're not allowed ot write whatever you feel like regardless of how you feel but misunderstandings are bound to come up. I think Mister Sadistro misinterpreted your motives behind posting the poem(s), the argument with trippin is beyond that anyway. You deciding to finally jump in and call Sadistro stupid is not helping anything, Sadistro is also one of the most helpful posters around here and he is also one of the smartest.

Misunderstandings happen, if people could just try to explain themselves without being insulting, they would be a lot easier to get passed.

why can't we all just get along :rolleyes:

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edited to avoid future problems even though I'm angry about it.

btw I didn't take a side. Neither of you need me to come in and help you, I just didn't like the idea of this new person coming in late to attack Sadistro. If she was going to say something, she should have done it when the argument concerned her.

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say that to the spammers...:p

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lmao I'd have to look under ever rock around to find them. :p

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ok, I know I shouldn't have wrote what I did and I'm sorry. I just repeated myself about it a couple of times and he seemed to not understand that I wasn't trying to get attention or kill myself and he couldn't get it and wouldn't stop saying that was what I was trying to do. I take offense to being portrayed as suicidal. I would never do that, I have too many kids who look up to me to even think about doing that. Life may be hard but, that is how it is sometimes and I would rather live through that and get the good when it comes my way than end it and not get that chance.

Also, I didn't just jump in at the end I was there the whole time. I'm sorry if I am slow at responding but, my daughter doesn't give me as much time as others have to hangout online all day.

One more thing, like a great mind once said, "why can't we all just get along?"

*waves bye*

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Did you even read what he originally posted to her before he edited it out? I wouldn't call anything SHE said an "attack". I'd say after that big "fuck you" he gave her, she has more than enough right to defend herself...even after she tried explaining 3 or more times. Why not tell your good friend Sadistro to chill out about it? Or wait around until the arguement concerns YOU.

Oh yeah, I guess I should "explain" myself better before someone takes what I say out of context also.
I'm not jumping on your case Angela...I just don't get why the need to defend the one who started it all, and act like he said nothing wrong. If he's your friend cool, I've been cool with him too. But when people are attacking my friend (yes, I know her so whether any of you think it concerns me or not, it does) for no reason at all, you're damn right I'M gonna defend her. All she ever did was share her poems...not post a note saying "feel sorry for me, I'm gonna kill myself" and she never said anything about ever actually attempting the act, or causing any kind of harm to herself. He's the one who blew it way out of proportion with his "fuck you".

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hey... I know sadistro made the initial mistake, I just didn't think she needed to throw in that comment after while trip and him were arguing. That's the only thing I wanted to say to her that I thought it was unnecessary. She seems cool and I wasn't trying to attack her, I was trying to mediate but I fucked up. :(

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WELL...what were they argueing about?:confused: She still had every right to defend herself.

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It's over, I'm removing myself from it.

It will pass,it will pass
deep breaths


I liked almost all the poems posted in this thread.

I give this thread a 8 out 10,it seemed to wander a bit and lost just a tad of narrative but all in all highly entertaining.
2 thumbs up:D

this has nothing wot so ever to do with this thread..
i been swimming all day..and its still bloody hot. :D

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You forgot "better looking" :D
CK

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I should have dug myself an even deeper hole and added that one. :p

Whatever happened to CONSTRUCTIVE criticism?:p ;)

BAH! It was a good read anyway...the poems, the criticisms, I enjoyed it all:D

Happy New Year to you too.....you smelly bastard!:p

socks!

LMFAO!!!!! We're so kind to each other:p

The original poem reminds me of the song "El Paso." The narrator of the tune sings about how he goes after his beloved, only to get shot by a rival. At the end of the song, the narrator dies. It begs the question: did he write and sing the song from the grave?

Regardless. New stories posted at www.marklaflamme.com