Twisted Fairy Tales

[Angra]

O´boy, what an oldie!

[bloodrayne]

Originally posted by Angra
O´boy, what an oldie!

Yup...Now READ it:)


There's a link to Grimm's original fairy tales...If it still works...I thought some of you guys might be interested...

And, personally, I'd like to see what some of you new guys would do with some of the old fairy tales...

[Angra]

Originally posted by bloodygurl02


jack goes up the bean stalk to a dark wasteland of bones w/ blood every where. the giants is now a a blood thirsty mutated giant

I like this piece.



I don´t quite remember the whole story, but here´s my version.

It´s like a horror version of "Labyrinth".

Jack finds a small box with 3 beans, yadayadayada... Jack wakes up next morning and discovers the beans has grown up into the sky. The next he notices is the giant, as described above, sliding down the bean stalk. He hides in fear while the giant destroys the village and eat all living it sees and on its way back takes something (Whatever) important to Jack before it crawls up into the sky.
After the shock, Jack gathers a few survivors and together they go after the giant up the bean stalk.
What they find at the end of the bean stalk is not just a field with a castle. It´s a small land that looks like the cross between a nightmare and hell (Read bloodygurl´s describtion and add dark gloomy woods, treacherous lakes and mountains) and far away in the distance they can see the castle. Somehow they know that´s where they have to go.
On their journey, the village people (LOL) encounters both helpful and horrifying cratures and as the story progresses they one by one suffers horrible deaths to all the evil that lurks in this harsh place.
When Jack finally stands in front of the big gates of the castle he´s all alone.

He finally manage to pull himself together and finds the courage to knock on the gates doors. The doors slooowly opens up and in the opening stands GOD and bid him a warm and friendly hello. "Welcome home Jack". - The end














(Just kidding about that last part);) :p :p :p

[Angra]

Here´s another ending to that story.


Jack finally manage to pull himself together and finds the courage to knock on the gates doors. The doors slooowly opens up and in the opening stands Zwoti and greets him:
"welcome Jack...............don't take things personally......etc


and keep repeating

it's only a forum...
it's only a forum..."


- The end


:p

[The_Return]

I actually like the 1st ending you thought up Angra. I could mean the Giant infact destroyed the enitre village, including Jack and the [ahem] village people, and the whole movie/story is, unbeknownst to them, the journey they must make to enter Heaven. I like it!


Peter Pan-

Peter is a ruthless serial killer/kidnapper, the lost boys are infact a brainwashed cult of children Peter kidnapped. Having been created by Neverland itself, Peter can never die under any cercumstances [sp?], and has retained the eternal youth of the land itself.. Peter leaves Never land to kidnap Micheal Darling, but his sibllings John and Wendy witness him, and a forced to acompany him to Neverland. Once there, he kills John inforont of Micheal and Wendy, and throws Wendy into the ocean. Days lter, she is picked up by a Pirtate Ship, which is lead by Captain Hook, and ruthless adult who escaped from Peter years ago by cutting off his own hand. He wants revenge, but until now, couldnt find Peter's camp, which Wendy was shown to before being left for dead. They break into Peter's camp, slaughter the lost boys as they are beyond saving, and chain Peter to a tree, after giving him a seryum that accelrates the aging process. As Peter wastes away, Hook chops off Wendys head and stiks it on a pike infront of Peter so he will always know the instrument of his demise.

[The_Return]

Oh, forgot something:


Thanks to a clever hiding place, Micheal survived the massacre. The ghastly, aged body of Peter convices Micheal to go to the very center of Neverland. Once there, the spirt of the land corupts Micheal through gruesome images and stories of terror unimaginable. He thus became the ageless Micheal Pan, doomed to live the curse of his predacessors forever.

[Arioch]

Good god....what an old thread....

[LadyFrost]

thanks to bloodrayne for showing me this thread, i've read the entire thing im glad i did, its helped me imensly...i've got a few ideas here are some of them....

little red riding hood:

little red is all grown up (well actually she's seventeen or so) and she's doing the "going into the forst" thing that her mother never told her to do, her mother's voice whispering in her head about the dangers of the forest. Her father, having been killed long ago, was once a woodcutter who use to come home, after a long day of cutting wood, to tell bedtime stories of all the "nasty" things that lived in the forest.

he once told little red about a cottage that was in the centre of the fores the housed a wicked witch in the guise of an old grandmother. being a bold little girl Little red always tried to venture into the forest to view this old cottage and the wicked witch, but was always thwarted. after her nine birthday Little Red forgot about the cottage putting it behind her. Her father died shortly after.

Now on the eve of her father's death Little red goes into the forst, wearing the blood red cloak, and wonders towards the cottage humming her favourite lullaby, the sun setting and the village woodcutters slowly walking home from a long days work.

upon reaching the little run down cottage Little Red knows upon the door repeating the words she always sings "Grandmother, Grandmother oh please let me in." (read this in an original version of Little Red) as always the witch lets her in, disguised as an old woman. once she is inside the cottage she see's the large massive wolf sitting in the corner of the little cottage, teeth bared snarling with saliva dripping from its black lips. Little Red screams, alerting one of the woodsman. He comes running, slaughters the wolf and saves Little Red. But...the witch is behind him and cuts him down, severing his head from his body.

Little Red smiles as she watches the body fall to the ground, an image of her father falling the same way many years before. his blood spilling upon her pretty white cloak that her mother had bought her for her birthday. the axe was quite heavy for her small little hands. as she watches the new woodsmand bleed to death her mothers voice rings in her ears, telling her not to go into the woods.

basically my Little Red story is that Little Red's father sexually abused her when she was younger, in the cottage in the woods, and her mother knew about it but could do nothing to stop it (females didnt have rights back then) except to warn Little Red never to go into the forest. so of course LIttle Red kills her father and then lures any woodscutters (lumping them in with her father and howe vile he was) to kill them. I dont know if i want to make the witch a figment of Little Reds imgination, to give her an excuse so that she doesn't realize she is the one killing the men or not.


i have a beauty and the beast story that im twisitng right now, but i havent gotten very far i've only thought up the idea that Beauty's family has been put under a curse (one that went wrong) and selected females in the family have gained two split personalities, one innocent and sweet the other twisted and evil. Her mother had the split personalities and Beauty is the only one out of her two sisters to gain the curse. She goes out every night and rampages through the village killing off whom ever she can find (in her evil personality state of course) the villages think its a beast and call for the Prince's aid. The Prince is the only living member of his family as long ago they were slaughtered by a beast (beauty's mother, but nobody but the father knows this) and now he is a cold senselss man. He refused the villages and leaves them to be slaughter. Beauty and her family live in the woods off the Princes Castle, keeping themselvs as far away from the village as possible....thats all i have so far....i have to figure out how im getting beauty into the castle...she's going confuse the hell out of the prince because one minute she's pure and innocent the next she's wicked and evil.

so what do you guys think?

xxfrostyxx

[LadyFrost]

Ok I thought up another variation, this one is for Sleeping Beauty and it was inspired but what Hash23 said about a crossover with Freddy. I hope that you all like it.

sleeping beauty:

sleeping beauty (aurora) is born to the most infamous King and Queen in all the land. They are the kindest, most loving people who treat their own people as they were apart of the royal family. it is unknown why when they finally concieved and birthed a child, that this child turned out to be the very epitome of evil.

On the day of Aurora's presentation to the Kingdom, a witch, condembed to the south woods of the Land, places a curse upon the child. A foretelling that when Aurora turned nineteen she would be placed into an enteral sleep, that she would never awake from. This witch was thought to be an evil melevalont sourceror and was banished from the castle. In truth the witch knew what kind of evil Aurora would spread across the land once she grew.

Slowly as the years crawled by the King and Queen begain to realize what their daughter was. She was not like other children, she did not place nice. She could not keep a pet without torturing it to death. She could not be left alone in a room with anyone. She was a terrible wicked child and the King and Queen could not wait for her nineteenth birthday and for the foretelling to come upon their only child.

For years three fairies, suposably good fairies, tried to convince the King and Queen that it was all the Witches fault.That she had placed a spell upon the Princess, making her do the Witches bidding. But the King and Queen would hear none of it. For they had kept a close eye upon the Witch, keeping guards at her door day and night in the woods. She had not cast any spells, she had done now magic since the night of Aurora's birth. She was not the one to blame. Finding no other course of action the King and Queen locked the Princess in the tallest tower. Keeping her away from everyone, believing this would keep the Kingdom safe until her birthday.

What they did not know was the Princess was visited by the three fairies who could transform themselves into whatever their hearts desired. Every night they would come to her tower, they would teach her things, things that not mortal being should ever know. And every night when the Princess slept, children in the Kingdom would die.

There was no explaining the cause of death. But there were simptoms that would appear weeks prior to the childs death. They would become restless in sleep. Bruises would appear along their arms and legs, like some fierce strength had gripped them. Nightmares would take hold every night. Until their last night where their screams of agony would drown the village before ceasing just before dawn, taking their last breath with them.

Nobody knew what was happening to the children. Except for the three fairies. They had taught the Princess how to dreamwalk...hoping that she would go to her parents in sleep and convince them that she was a normal person and she was not evil. They had not expected the deep seeded evil that lay dormint inside Aurora while she was awake. Her true evil was shown when she slept and travelled to the dreams of the children.

Unabale to bear what they had done the fairies devised a spell that would keep the princess awake long enough to see her nineteenth birthday without harming another child. Two weeks she was kept awake. Two weeks in which she sent her mother insane with the ramblings of escapades in the dreams of the children. She would yell to anyone who could hear her of all the evil deeds she had done. The halls echoed with her crimes.

Finally the night of her birthday arrived. She was taken down from her tower and brought to her room, oppulently direcated. She had become weak and fragile from the weeks of yelling and crying out. She had been brought now food for the last week of her entrapment, no water for the last two days. She was close to death when they layed her upon the silk sheets of her chamber bed. As the sun set, the golden raise of life flooding the floor, the dark princess fell into her last slumber. The foretelling had come about. Weeks prior the Witch had come to the castle demanding to speak with the King and Queen. She had told them that the killings in the village would stop with her foretelling. If the Princess surcombed to the eternal sleep, she would be trapped within her own nightmar, unable to escape and terrify the young ones while they slept. The deaths would stop when the Princess slumbered deeply.

For ten years the Princess slept. Her chamber was kept immaculate. She was clensed daily by maids employed for just such a task. Her hair brushed and braided nightly. It was if they were waiting for her to rise. The King and Queen lived their lives as if they did not have a daughter, as if she was just a bad dream. They had two more children, a son who would one day be King and another daughter, as sweet and innocent as any flower in their royal gardens. The village was finally returning to the way it use to be, the families of the children who died getting on with their lives. They too had more children and life was happy.

But ten years to the day of whence the Princess closed her eyes for the final time, a maid observed their flicking. As clensed her skin with a soapy cloth the maid watched in horror as the Princess's milky white hand twitched and curled in on itself. The Princess was awakening. Believing that enough time had past and that the Princess would awaken a different person the three fairies had over the years collected engouh knowledge of the witches spell to be break it. BUt with every spell there is always a loop hole, something that can undo it . The Witches power was too great for the fairies and they could not break it completely. The only way for the spell to be completely broken was if a Prince, of pure royal blood, were to kiss the soft lips of the Princess. Only then could she fully awaken.

But alas the Prince to whom this spell could break vanished years before. He went hunting in the woods with his cousin and never returned.

The Witch having had the fairies watched all these years discovered their plan and decided that she had best act fast. Knowing that the King and Queen had given up on their daughter years before, she sent one of the men tended to her horses to the castle to finally end the Kingdoms curse. He was sent to kill the princess. Unbeknownst to the Witch the man she sent to the castle, the man who had appeared on her doorstep years before begging for work, was the Prince who had vanished while hunting.

While sneaking into her room, the Prince observed the Princess finding her beauty rare and alluring. He spent many hours at the foot of her bed that night, watching her sleep, watching her breath expell from her lungs over and over. He tried to kill her, raised his sword many times. But in the end her beauty bewitched him and he fell before her, planting a kiss of devotion upon her lips.

I'm actually going to use this idea for my sleeping beauty variation for my fairytale collection. I'm going to have the first chapter start with a narrator, a woman telling her child a bedtime story. By the end of you return to the narrator and through a series of clues you find out she is actually Aurora and that she was brought back to life by the princes's kiss.

Hope you like.

xxfrostyxx

PS sorry about the length its just I find I can explain things better if I do them in short story format

[LadyFrost]

LOL nice one Dave...always eating someone, somewhere ;)

But I might place woodland creatures in another fairytale...I've got forty pages of Grimms tales to look through tonight to get ideas from. And another 150 stories to look through tomorrow lol.

I'll find somewhere to put your ideas.

xxfrostyxx