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... tossing and turning a landscape of broken men bearing down on me sweat hits my forehead all claws and teeth surround me a rusty floorboard remnants of harsh dreams stumble numbly through my day give me strength to sleep ... |
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@ newb - thanks :)
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handcuffed to a dancing tumour
black blood spiritual disease sooths nothing the real thing bites harder are you her now are you here now |
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How is this a haiku?
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these are some great haikus - someone should publish the amazing authors of HDC!
"Bedtime" boxsprings and mattress sturdy wooden frame surrounds but what waits beneath
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monkeys invented haikus
its a well known fact!
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Late night, hang my cloak Stillness instantly broken Was that breath I felt? The End Shot rings through the night Blood splatters on the carpet T'was too much to bear Would love to hear what people thought. I don't write much.
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