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HDC The Movie 2: Zero Takes Manhattan (Desert Bar and Tavern)
The original writing was well-received enough for me to want to write a part 2, now characters from the previous will be involved so please read the original story first, Read it throughout this topic.
The first part will be up by tonight/early tomorrow. See ya soon ladies and gents. 
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my character better kick some asses.:)
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I like the title...I always felt that the Zero Monkey was really the main killer but the first movie was like a warm-up, a handshake, with occasional appearances with the Zero Monkey but you don't quite realize that he's about to go ape-shit on everyone. Please make Nicedog a character too, he is one of the things I came up with for "The Two Wolves Show" reprinted here courtesy of crabnapple prods.:
ANNOUNCER. Well, folks, I'm sure you can tell by now that those two wolves we've been feeding have sure been having a time with each other. (ANNOUNCER is joined by two cartoon wolves that walk out on stage on their hind legs. One wolf is PALE GRAY and one is DARK GRAY BROWN. The dark gray brown wolf is rubbing a bruise on his forehead, and looks like he'll have a lump for a while, but he's in decent spirits.) NICEDOG. I gave him a WHOOPAH! (Audience laughter) ANNOUNCER. Meandog, you sure got a smacking today, it looks like. MEANDOG. Oh yeah. ANNOUNCER. And tell me if you can what you have to say about that. MEANDOG. Well---he may have kicked my ass today, but the next time I see him, I will put a boot up his!! (Audience laughter, followed by applause) MEANDOG. I'm evil! Ha cha cha cha cha cha! (MEANDOG makes a cartoon thug pose like Bowser from Sha Na Na, and slinks off stage to more applause.) (NICEDOG is smiling about something.) ANNOUNCER. That Meandog, he's quite a character. And you, Nicedog, you look awfully smug. Are you thinking about that can of whoop-ass you opened a little while ago? NICEDOG. Nuh-uh. I made a poo poo! ANNOUNCER. Now don't start THAT again. You're always talking about poo poo. Don't you have anything meaningful to say to the audience, about good and evil, for example? NICEDOG. A poopa poopa! A poop poop! (Starts making raspberry-type fart noises and laughing.) ANNOUNCER. Oh boy. NICEDOG. Poopahhhhhhhhhh! Poopahhhhh ha ha hah. ANNOUNCER. G'night folks.
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08-11-2007, 08:30 PM
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Nice MMM .
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Excellent start. This is gonna be REALLY good...I can feel it.
btw, the redhead primate rulez!!:cool:
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