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Old 11-28-2006, 05:00 AM
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Re: Story Submissions: 4 of them

My first rejection letter in 2 years:
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Thank you for submitting your work. We've carefully considered your
submission but have decided to pass. Please consider us again in the future.

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Michael H, Editor
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i submitted Justice, the Safe, Bearwood and Father Dillon's Funeral



I fell like i actually accomplished something because rejection means they at least read them. I need to work out some rewrites,I guess. I had some great suggestions about Bearwood and the Safe down in the horror writer's forum
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Old 11-28-2006, 05:19 AM
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My first rejection letter in 2 years:


i submitted Justice, the Safe, Bearwood and Father Dillon's Funeral



I fell like i actually accomplished something because rejection means they at least read them. I need to work out some rewrites,I guess. I had some great suggestions about Bearwood and the Safe down in the horror writer's forum
don't just stop with them...
send copies out to every publisher you can find.
and good on you..:D
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Old 11-28-2006, 05:29 AM
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Any suggestions from anyone (I'm looking at Rod, in case he isnt completely tired of people asking him to comment on their stuff) for suggestions on how to make them flow better, maybe my punctuation makes it read akwardly, the characters need more depth, etc.

Ah hell, here's all o fmy stuff. Feedback needed, I am looking to push heavily at trying to get published:

i already posted 4 of them, but here is the whole shebang:
Justice
the Safe
Bearwood
Father Dillon's Funeral
Abuse
Absolution
The Eating Tree

Now, i dont want anyone to think that i am not addressing previous suggestions. In Absolution, there will be more torture. This was requested, and i admit, it is a bit light considering the circumstances.

Rod had suggested an identity of somesort for the narrartor in The Eating Tree. i am still mulling this one over. I like the fairy tale feel of it, but i may do a rewrite with an assigned POV and then people can let me know which flows better.

I loved Haunted's suggestions for Bearwood, and I think they will help clear up some underlying issues i always had with it.


LEt me know what you think, though. This isnt just another simple pimping on my part (its a complex pimping :D). But i really would like some useful feedback.
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Old 11-28-2006, 05:46 AM
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And I almost forgot this:

Gloom Prelude
Gloom Chapter 1

here is a discussion on it by good ol' Stingy Jack (we miss ye, pumpkin head)
http://horror.com/forum/showthread.php?t=8185

Also full o fsuggestions that i should get off my ass and accomplish.
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Old 11-28-2006, 05:54 AM
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who did you send to ?
i thought it was impossible to get anything through to anyone without a literary agent ?
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Old 11-28-2006, 06:03 AM
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who did you send to ?
i thought it was impossible to get anything through to anyone without a literary agent ?
A lot of magazines and websites take independant submissions. This one was easy because it only required an email. So far i havent gotten off my ass in a LONG time to send out any hard copy submissions, but i am gearing up for that right now.



Edit: Sorry, it was a website called "Antimuse". It is sort of a counter-culture site.
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Old 11-28-2006, 06:18 AM
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A lot of magazines and websites take independant submissions. This one was easy because it only required an email. So far i havent gotten off my ass in a LONG time to send out any hard copy submissions, but i am gearing up for that right now.
when i was sorting my books i was suprised to see i have a good sized stack that deal with getting books published.
i imagine they go out of date fairly quickly but some seem recent.

its something i definately want to look into sometime ..
(as if i'll ever have the time :rolleyes: )
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Old 11-28-2006, 06:22 AM
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This site is probably not the sort of thing you're after :confused: http://www.lulu.com/uk but there may be a US equivalent. It's a site for 'on demand printing'.... If someone's interested in your writing, they'll print a copy and send it out. It could be a good way of getting your work seen. You can upload any manuscript and cover art you want to have published free of charge then people order 'said' book through the webiste, they print it on demand and then take the printing/binding costs out of the selling cost and you pocket the rest.
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Old 11-28-2006, 06:26 AM
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This site is probably not the sort of thing you're after :confused: http://www.lulu.com/uk but there may be a US equivalent. It's a site for 'on demand printing'.... If someone's interested in your writing, they'll print a copy and send it out. It could be a good way of getting your work seen. You can upload any manuscript and cover art you want to have published free of charge then people order 'said' book through the webiste, they print it on demand and then take the printing/binding costs out of the selling cost and you pocket the rest.
I'm looking at it right now. Thanks :)


WEEEEEIRD.... I have no recolection of signing up, but i already have an account with my email address and regular password..... creepy.
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