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Still free...just downloaded it...
Will read in a moment and reply!
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Ok, read it...
Nice enough for a short story. No real build up, but in a story this short, who needs it?
Kind of an abrupt end. Kinda "convenient" the way he was so careful for 2 years and then all of a sudden gets sloppy by leaving blood on his dashboard. How'd he miss that?
Still it was worth the few minutes spent reading...
Cool.
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Last edited by Rawhead Rex; 04-24-2014 at 02:12 PM.
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