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Originally Posted by HughSweeney
Hi Folks,
My first post here (hopefully the first of many). I've just finished my new horror film and it's ready for viewing. I managed to make it for about €150 / $200 which was pretty cool. I had no crew, just myself and the actor(s).
I'd really appreciate if you could watch it and maybe give me some feedback.
Happy Christmas!!
Hugh
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIHK...eature=mh_lolz |
Well since you asked so nicely I'll give you a proper critique. I really liked a lot of this short. It was shot well, lit well and had great audio. It mostly worked well too. The main problem I see is that in this sorta film less is more. It was effectively creepy and unnerving until the voice started saying more then little things. Hello a few times and I've found you would have closed the deal nicely. Also the big reveal at the end took all fear of the unknown out of it completely. I feel that you are very capable and could have made a properly scarring ending. However aside from the story direction being ham handed the overall production is great. Understand that I'm just giving you advice because I deem your production worthwhile enough to care. No offense is intended by my opinion.