[neverending]

Your strong point is the visuals. The way you shot everything, the framing, special effects, the masking, color pallette, editing- even the acting, are all spot on. Some really smart choices. Several notches above most of the stuff that's posted here.

A few things that I felt weren't so strong: The font is hard to read, and several times the captions went by so fast I couldn't read them. You misspelled a word: there/their. Several times you used odd wording, such as "In ancient times it was a custom to believe..." instead of the more direct "It was an ancient belief..." I suggest you work with a writer to refine the text.

Also, if this is to be a real trailer, at the very end, the guy with the gun... I think it gives away too much.


All in all, this is really excellent, and I hope you're able to make this film.