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I really agree with NE - Also, I kept wondering "Where are they going and why is it scary?" It just seemed random that they rocked up to someone's empty house. Also, the lined paper signs weren't very successfully ominous. Neither were the drawings, and typically that stuff can be truly creepy. Why would they just disregard them if we as the audience are suppose to time them scary? Maybe one of the actors should react to them, in concern or fear.
The sound needed work, especially when they were riding over to the camp and at one point, was Picture-in-Picture on? It was distracting.
Slenderman's a great, creepy topic but this did not build mood for me. Good luck with future projects!
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