You're probably not getting any replies because no one knows who Liver Eating Johnson is. Maybe you can provide us with some backstory on him. Also, it'd be helpful to know how long your script is supposed to be. 5 pages, 10 pages, feature length, etc...
Without knowing any details, all I can say is that a cannibalistic hillbilly/redneck isn't all that original as far as horror villains go.
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