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			I think it's very hard to write under tight word requirements. alfred hitchcock's mystery magazine has a contest every month where they include a picture and you have to link the picture to a crime and write a story about it in 200 words or less.  
 
in my opinion writing a good 200 word story is harder than writing a good 20,000 word story. I have not seen very many contest winning 200 word stories in AHMM that I like. 
 
not many people in this section ever will hear this,  I liked your story.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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