Just finished reading the last 2 chapters....sorry for this delayed response FC.
I think this is the best ending you have written so far in here and that's a clear sign of your fantastic level of improvement for sure. Truly enjoyed every bit of it. Action, humor, emotion nonetheless the characters & their developments all parts are top notch. Wish you again all the best in your future creative works and eager to see frequently more that in HDC.:)
|