[neverending]

You've obviously put a lot of effort into this endeavor, but I've got to give you an average grade, at best.

Acting is wooden and amateurish. Ditch the family members and find some local actors to help you out. Particularly your father- he's awful.

Scripts are poorly written. "Stitching wire?" "I'm calling the police department!"The entire department? The "twist" endings are obvious from the get go.

Directing/editing pedestrian. Tighten up your editing. The pacing is very slow.

Production- slipshod. Props are often laughable. He knocked that guy out with a toy rolling pin?

You set up sequences well, and know how to cut for continuity, but you have a long way to go.