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Well, not bad. Interesting start. The dialogue between the two guys is boring. Ingeneral I'd like to see more variety in shot selection, particularly in the car, but not bad for a no budget effort.
You get extra points for your honest approach here in the forum. Thanks for being honest about who you are. I wish you good luck on this release.
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Cartoon Artwork, Underground Art, Other Weird Stuff
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