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Well, let me start by saying I LOATHE Adam Sandler. CAN'T STAND HIM.
That being said, you seem to have come up with a vehicle that suits his "talents." It's an adequate low-brow plot that would probably satify his fans.
There's a huge plot hole mid-way. The boss has been sustaining himself for 125 years without getting caught and all of the sudden he steals 200 gallons of blood. Doesn't make sense. And yes, even low-brow formulaic comedies need to have internal logic.
You fulfilled all the requirements of the assignment. Competant job. It will get good marks from me.
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