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This is a question mainly for people with insider knowledge of the industry. I'm in a logline contest this month and I need to place in the top 25% to advance to the next round.

Please take a look at this logline and let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions for improving it. What you see below is exactly whatt he judges will see, just a title and logline so I need it to be good.

If you do not have knowledge of loglines, then please just let me know if it seems like a film you'd be intersted in seeing or not based solely on what is written below.


Who the Hell is Sheldon Reese?
"Bullets and wisecracks abound as a self-absorbed actor, at risk of becoming the next victim of a celebrity-slaying hitman, must unravel the mystery surrounding the murder of a rival while reversing his slumping career and juggling his promiscuous love life."


Thanks to anyone that offers any assistance.