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Originally Posted by neverending
This effect could be carried out with your script. It could be presented in the form of an on the scene audio diary. For instance- when he's examining tthe boy, he calls out to the villagers and orders them to help him. We hear them protest, and we hear the Dr. persuade them. Then he describes what he sees, in its gruesome detail, as the boy's arm comes off... He doesn't tell us there was banging on the door- we hear it, as we hear the boy's calls....
Good marks for subject matter. Low marks for execution. You've done much better.
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Agreed on the execution. I've been feeling like death for about two weeks now (I'm blaming it on the change in meds; that way it means that it'll END soon) and I'm having a HELL of a time functioning. I was going to pass on this challenge but didn't want to be eliminated for giving up on something that will (hopefully) pass soon.
In terms of the "You've done much better" remark, you sound like my parents, teachers, and professors. :rolleyes:
Grading should be blind. That way I don't have to compete with high expectations. :p