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A very interesting plot Noir... quite detailed and does seem to be rather Riceish.

I'm left with a few questions, however. Why 1931? Does the year have some specific bearing on the plot? If not, why not? Is this a stupid question- why doesn't a group of teenagers wandering the country in a carnival arouse any suspicions? Like, why aren't they in school?

I like the setting of the carnival though... was there a specific reason for setting it in 1931 instead of, say, a modern day sideshow/circus like Jim Rose's?

A very good entry overall.