OK, here's my critiques - I'm doing all 4 of them in this post.
bwind: I can't say anything different than the other judges have already said, and I agree completely with neverending.
Cactus: I like your choice of both author and story for the follow-up to Dracula. The Dunwich Horror is one of my favorite Lovecraft stories, too. Good job!
Dude: I'm surprised that you didn't give more detail. It was actually pretty disappointing. I expected more from you.
Freak: If you did that for real, you would end up in jail on assault charges. Couldn't you come up with something better? Terrible!
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