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Old 10-19-2008, 07:43 PM
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Originally Posted by urgeok2 View Post
i had to edit myself about 12 times on this one.

best not to say anything.

must not type
hahaha

in context, this, for whatever reason, is the funniest thing i've read all day.

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Originally Posted by neverending View Post
Guess it's my turn.

This is my night.
A night of unknown creatures
Lurking in the shadows,
And darkness the monarch.
For one night at least.

This is my time.
The time between times.
And those who journey forth
See things others cannot.
For a while, at least.

Dark figures do battle
In the eternal war
Greater than humankind
Would ever dare to dream.
I am one who fights.
Awake to the war
Most have no inkling of.

These are my friends.
The few who feel the same as I.
Alive for a night,
And merely watching other nights pass by.

This is my feeling
On the Hallowed Eve.
Each time it touches Earth,
I live again.


http://www.neverendingwonder.com/time.txt
excellent work, ne.
perfect reading for the season!

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Originally Posted by The Flayed One View Post
Thanks, hon. It's a very sloppy WIP right now, I'm afraid. One day I'll turn it into an illustrated childrens novel, I swear:D
holy smokes, flayed! i was thinking the exact same thing reading your poems:
"this would make a really good illustrated story."
seriously, if you ever get it made, be sure to let me know cause i'm buying one.

speaking of books, i'm thinking we could throw all of these poems (plus all of marley's others, of course) together and make a "poetry of HDC" book (hey, it even rhymes!)
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