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Old 04-15-2008, 11:56 AM
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Originally Posted by Marley's Ghost View Post

A CHAINED THAT I FORGED
I CAN BLAME NO OTHER
BECAUSE I WAS NOT BREAST FED
I SUPPOSE I CAN BLAME MY MOTHER

I'LL BE HERE FOREVER
YOU COME AND GO AS YOU PLEASE
REMEMBER THAT THE NEXT TIME
MARLEY'S GHOST YOU WANT TO TEASE
The Graveyard was the perfect place for this poem, cuz you just MURDERED the iambic pentameter in this one:p

I still love ya tho :)

And yes, I left out the part about percentages...But, that was why I added that you had only messed up a little a few times...You know, considering the volume
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