Quote:
Originally posted by Marley's Ghost
Your poems suck
they do not rhyme
leave the metrical composition
to the pros in the Big Time
Get off the computer
what tales you could tell
enjoy the real world
learn how to spell
Stop being so needy
begging for acceptance
you're life is what you make it
stop being so dense
You're whole life lies ahead
make new friends, meet a guy
you'll be lonely all your life
if you don't go out and try
Forums are a nice diversion
to virtually socialize
just leave room for reality
to leave you healthy and wise
I suggest another leave of absence
take about a year, don't let us hinder
and pretty soon we'll be saying
"Whatever happened to scaryminda"
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I actually thought THAT was pretty damn good.:eek:
But what the hell do I know about poems?..:rolleyes: