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Old 05-02-2006, 07:50 PM
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I like it, i actually was hoping to read more. I like the idea of the little boy finishing the movie before he calls 911. I could see this whole set up in my head. I pictured the dad in a wife beater with a can of beer in his hand through the whole thing. The only negative thing i was thinking was, i think the woman would have a little fear towards her husband. I think she would hold back from throwing anything at him or even really swearing at him. I really like the whole idea of this, good luck!!