[stubbornforgey]

your poems are good but ..umm ..kinda black don't you think..
honestly...i wish i had never scanned them cos they have just put a whole downer on my night..
you were only 13..I hear ya'..
Poems reflect ones moods at the time of writing ..I like poetry..i like depth of somebody elses thoughts.
When i write..I write on a spur of the moment..something humurous happens..
i put it to poetry..
something pisses me off ...i put it to poetry.
etc.etc..
I think you should take a good look at taking this up seriously..but try not to always look for the doom and gloom of things...good luck..