Design Your Own Death
This is a good chance for anyone to be a killer.
I want this thread to be about horror fans creating their own death scene.
Please don't rip-off movie death scenes.
This is a good way to crack into the twisted heads of the horror.com members.
You don't have to tell the whole story. Just build up a scenario and write the death scene.
Here is an example of; My death scene:
Shaken from the voices and the madness in her tired head Marisa sat in the corner of the darkened room. She wept dryly, drummed her head against the wall, clutched her legs with a hug, and feared the shadows that we're clouding her mind.
She would have shivered from the cold wind that willowed from the open window but something kept her warm. Maybe it was her fear or perhaps the tears.
Marisa realized she was no longer a sleep. The nightmare she had just moments ago had waken her suddenly. But, now as she sits on the floor with her eyes clenched, being to frightened to open them, the nightmare is not gone.
The sickening distorting shadows. Their bodys like long dead men, their faces like nothing ever concieved of before. Their faces were difficult to detail, they were continuely shifting like images in a dark horizon.
Hard and heavy breathes release from Marisas gut. She decides to open eyes to stop the headache begining to numb her.
A few dangling tears drop from her lashes as her quivering lids struggle to part. Her breathing subsides, slightly. The shadows of long dead men fading from her awareness, and places her hands to her throbbing head before opening her eyes.
She's still against her bedroom wall, in the dark, and starting to feel the cold wind upon her.
She pushes herself to stand. Her knees wobble from the sudden pressure of posture.
Marisa looks all around her room. At her bed for warm comfort.
Marisas attention shifts when feeling a twitch in her head. It was a disturbing sensation like a pair of clawed icy hands rubbing at her brain.
And after Marisas one last breath the hands inside her head clap together smoothly. An eruption of brief pain as brain splatters in her skull, Marisa crumples lifeless to the floor.
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" I see a world where there's only cause and effect.
A world where every object is an avatar and no gods move behind the scenes " -- From A Buick 8 by Stephen King
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