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It's weird, I'm in a writing class and somebody wrote a zombie stroy for it.
Be careful, because right now it seems to be all action and nothing inside the narrator's head. You said there was more to the story, but right now I don't know anything about your character except that he's in most likely the biblical apocalypse.
There's my tidbit.
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MISINTUPITATED- The act of removing the spine by use of fire.
DEVESTED- The removal of one's vest.
SCTUPP- To deficate on a woman after nonconsensual sex.
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