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bloodrayne 10-18-2008 09:58 AM

Poetry Thread
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Posher778 (Post 744299)
Should I do one for you next? You know how I love famous extremist females.:eek:

Ok, If we're going to write poems for forum members, I'm posting the one that I wrote for Dustin 4 years ago (of all the poems I've written, it's still my favorite) :

Dark Angel

Out of the deepest darkness,
A magnificent creature appeared,
He approached through swirling gray mist,
Awakening my curiosity and fear

I stood still, watching and waiting,
Pondering his malevolent intentions,
Intrigued and nervously anticipating,
The revelation of this dark apparition

Slowly and silently, he came to me,
As black clouds swiftly crossed the sky,
Soft echoes whispered, "Eternity",
All around me, and inside my mind

Confusion overwhelmed me,
Was this a nightmare or a dream?
I was unable to think clearly,
Should I sigh or should I scream?

Soon he was in front of me,
I was able to look into his eyes,
They were black, but not empty,
My reflection was inside

Slowly, he spread his huge, black wings,
Raising them high into the night sky,
In his chest, something red, and glowing,
Was the only part of him that seemed alive

In the darkness, its brilliance nearly made me blind,
I thought that it may have been blood or fire,
With a black twisted claw, he reached inside,
As if he knew, what my mind had inquired

He removed the object, without a word being spoken,
It was so bright that I could see, what I couldn't see before,
That this amazingly powerful being was broken,
A beautiful face, filled with pain, Impressive wings tattered and torn

Without ever speaking, he made me understand,
Everything suddenly became clear in my mind,
As he placed his still-beating heart in my hands,
I knew that this dark angel, was forever mine

The Flayed One 10-18-2008 06:29 PM

*ahem*

Not long ago, but far away
On a dark and dreary day
This is where my horrid tale begins

If my pen dictates it right
You'll turn pale and die of fright
Or ridicule my writing; it depends

In a shack gone dank with dust
Metal siding aged with rust
And evil symbols carved into the door

Underneath a pregnant sky
Through which howling wolves shrill cried
A robed and cackling figure crossed the floor

Erwin Twystye was his name
An inbred doctor of no fame
Unlike his dad, with whom he was no match

His father, 'neath incestuous swoon
Produced a son that was a loon
Who studied pouring whiskey down his hatch

Twystye now away did slink
Towards the porcelain kitchen sink
And started mixing regents in a flurry

Everything he had he threw
Into his primordial stew
While drinking gin until his voice grew slurry

Cracks of lighting smote the ground
As Twyste cackled, leapt and bound
And staggered in a drunken swaying motion

Amongst the dank and molded mess
The Dr. finally found success
In brewing up a secret Goblin Potion

bloodrayne 10-18-2008 06:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Flayed One (Post 744492)
*ahem*

Not long ago, but far away
On a dark and dreary day
This is where my horrid tale begins

If my pen dictates it right
You'll turn pale and die of fright
Or ridicule my writing; it depends

In a shack gone dank with dust
Metal siding aged with rust
And evil symbols carved into the door

Underneath a pregnant sky
Through which howling wolves shrill cried
A robed and cackling figure crossed the floor

Erwin Twystye was his name
An inbred doctor of no fame
Unlike his dad, with whom he was no match

His father, 'neath incestuous swoon
Produced a son that was a loon
Who studied pouring whiskey down his hatch

Twystye now away did slink
Towards the porcelain kitchen sink
And started mixing regents in a flurry

Everything he had he threw
Into his primordial stew
While drinking gin until his voice grew slurry

Cracks of lighting smote the ground
As Twyste cackled, leapt and bound
And staggered in a drunken swaying motion

Amongst the dank and molded mess
The Dr. finally found success
In brewing up a secret Goblin Potion

WOW *applauds*

That was seriously, SERIOUSLY good :)

pinkfloyd45769 10-18-2008 06:36 PM

Flayed,you have talent!That is really good;)

Marley's Ghost 10-18-2008 08:58 PM

Many good poets here
bloodrayne,festered and flayed
but despare has you all beat
his poetry is well played

newb 10-18-2008 09:10 PM

There once was a fellow O'Doole
Who found little red spots on his tool
His Doctor a cynic
said Get out of me clinic,
And wipe off that lipstick you fool!

The Flayed One 10-18-2008 09:18 PM

There once was an old man named newb
Who many folks thought was a rube
said he 'Tis not true!
I could talk at age 2
Were my lips not attached to a boob!'

ChronoGrl 10-19-2008 05:02 AM

My geeky senses are tingling with veritable glee.

Marley - You need to be around more often. This thread was awesome.
Festered - You're one of my favorite new people. The poems were fantastic (in terms of actual content and theme, while I appreciate this poetic ribbing, I'm definitely siding with you here), though I have to admit that I took sheer joy out of the punny "poet" names.
Despare - You always make me giggle.
Rayne - That poem for Dustin... Just proves that you guys are perfect for each other. :D I liked it a lot, actually (he's a very lucky guy).
Flayed - Who knew you were a poet? :p

It's actually really refreshing to be around people who not only know five dollar words, know how to use them, but can rhyme them as well (THAT'S talent).

And Newb...
Quote:

Originally Posted by newb (Post 744140)
There once was a fellow McSweeny
Who spilled some gin on his weenie
Just to be couth
He added vermouth
Then slipped his girlfriend a martini

That's... Just... Pure genius.

crabapple 10-19-2008 05:49 AM

ODE TO SQUIRRELISHNESS

Squeaking, screeching thing from hell,
How do you do your thing so well?
Tail ashiver in the cold night air,
Buck teeth shining in the moon's cold glare.

neverending 10-19-2008 07:45 AM

Guess it's my turn.

This is my night.
A night of unknown creatures
Lurking in the shadows,
And darkness the monarch.
For one night at least.

This is my time.
The time between times.
And those who journey forth
See things others cannot.
For a while, at least.

Dark figures do battle
In the eternal war
Greater than humankind
Would ever dare to dream.
I am one who fights.
Awake to the war
Most have no inkling of.

These are my friends.
The few who feel the same as I.
Alive for a night,
And merely watching other nights pass by.

This is my feeling
On the Hallowed Eve.
Each time it touches Earth,
I live again.


http://www.neverendingwonder.com/time.txt


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