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ferretchucker 01-06-2009 07:31 AM

HDC : Corpse in Orbit
 
Well, I said that you might all get a Christmas treat, so here it is...late.

Most of you should hopefully remember my HDC: Darkness and Daggers Series, which will be returning in September. I have decided that due to the demand of D and D's fans, I will give in, and write you a little treat, but not quite the same. D and D was set in the past, in a world of dragons and magic, but what about the opposite side of the dice? The world of the future...

If there is enough interest in this, it will go ahead. A series starring the Horror.com community, set in the future, up in space. So, if you'd like to be included, please just post a comment, with a rough outline of what you would like your character will be like personality wise.

So...any takers?

hammerfan 01-06-2009 07:34 AM

*raises hand* Me, me!! I always pictured myself as a Ripley-type character. Tough on the outside, but with a soft center.

_____V_____ 01-06-2009 07:36 AM

Sounds very interesting. Count me in.

A smartass marine who saves all but doesnt live to rejoice with the survivors in the end. Pretty similar to this guy...

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/g...cks-BadAss.jpg


:cool:

Dante'sInferno 01-06-2009 07:36 AM

I want my characters name to be, Dante. I just want him to be behind the scenes with occasional appearences. With his motives masked and non-specified.

newb 01-06-2009 07:40 AM

I'll take a part........give me something along the lines of this guy

http://gfx1.gamelink.com/GLImages/ad...ohn_holmes.jpg

maybe I can find Hammer's "soft center"
:D

Doc Faustus 01-06-2009 08:28 AM

Can I be an interplanetary missionary who gets advise from a mysterious extraterrestrial "god" but is bound by mortal frailties and emotions which sometimes counteract the deity's agendas?

Dante'sInferno 01-06-2009 08:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Doc Faustus (Post 776015)
Can I be an interplanetary missionary who gets advise from a mysterious extraterrestrial "god" but is bound by mortal frailties and emotions which sometimes counteract the deity's agendas?

You kick ass. :)

ferretchucker 01-06-2009 08:43 AM

All of you will surely be included. I should hopefully have the first part up tonight.

But first, MORE CHARACTERS NEEDED!

Doc Faustus 01-06-2009 08:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dante'sInferno (Post 776019)
You kick ass. :)

I try. Especially when somebody steals my goldfish crackers.

Dante'sInferno 01-06-2009 08:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Doc Faustus (Post 776025)
I try. Especially when somebody steals my goldfish crackers.

Oh! Can I have a mildly retarded sidekick that has a cybernetic implant, so , after every sentence he says " Cake " and "Hard Nipples" ? Oh I want his name to be Spanky.



I can understand if you won't be able to that. Well atleast I tried.

Dante'sInferno 01-06-2009 09:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doc Faustus (Post 776025)
I try. Especially when somebody steals my goldfish crackers.


..............:D

hammerfan 01-06-2009 11:18 AM

Oooohhhhhh, I like it!!

newb 01-06-2009 11:22 AM

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Originally Posted by hammerfan (Post 776079)
Oooohhhhhh, I like it!!

I don't.


Nothing about newb and his enormous schwanzstucker with his bevy of woman.:mad:

ferretchucker 01-06-2009 11:23 AM

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Originally Posted by newb (Post 776081)
I don't.


Nothing about newb and his enormous schwanzstucker with his bevy of woman.:mad:

Now, now, there will be Newb.

hammerfan 01-06-2009 11:25 AM

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Originally Posted by newb (Post 776081)
I don't.


Nothing about newb and his enormous schwanzstucker with his bevy of woman.:mad:


Damn, impatient dirty old devil, aren't you? :p

Dante'sInferno 01-06-2009 11:27 AM

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Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 776073)
Here goes!

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...ucker/gabe.jpg

Opening credits role. Cut to a shot of New York. A voice over speaks.

Voice Over: In the year 2010, the human race prepared themselves for the greatest catastrophe in the history of the planet. For decades, a secret war had been going on between many countries. Each one knew how it would end, and they all prepared for it...

Suddenly, the image lights up, and a huge mushroom cloud shoots into the sky, turning it blood red. Cut to a shot of space, with several space stations in sight.

Voice Over: Thirty five space stations were sent up into the air, each one taking three hundred and fifty humans. One space station was for Japan, one for France, eight for China, one for England, one for Germany, one for Australia, eleven for America, two for Canada, seven for Russia and two were to preserve as many animals as possible.

The screen fades to black. Fade back in to the same shot, only the space stations look slightly different. More high tech, but dirtier.

Voice Over: Two hundred and thirty seven years later, in 2247, the human race has continued to survive on their space stations. They now live by recycling. Clothes are made from old clothes, machines are made from old machines and food is made from...old food. Of course, as time went by, people moved stations and each one is now very multi cultural. The German station has a large Japanese community on it.
It is ironically the Chinese ship that has the least amount of people left, at two hundred and three. The Canadian ships have the most with six hundred and one, and six hundred and twenty one. But it was none of these ships that faced the horrors that were to come...oh no. It all started on one of the American stations...

Fade to a shot of a space station. It appears to have been added to over the years giving it an odd appearance, like several toys that have broken and stuck together randomly by a child with glue. Fade to a control room. Only three people are in there, two at computers. A young man is at one computer.

Ferretchucker: Captain, I think you should take a look at this.

A taller, slightly older man walks over. He is wearing clothing that looks like an army uniform. He squints at the screen. It's a black image, with a few orange dots, obviously stars, and a large blue fraction of a circle; Earth. But in between Earth and the ship, is a strange haze, fluctuating between green and purple.

Dante: Hmmm. It doesn't look harmful...in fact, the computer seems to be drawn to it. Look at the Tantometer, it's nearly off the scale.

Ferretchucker: What could it be? I've never seen anything like it.

Dante: Neither have I...what's the nearest ship?

The woman on the other computer speaks up.

Hammerfan: AM05. I'm trying to get in contact with them now sir.

She taps at a keyboard under the desk.

Hammerfan: What the fu-

The screen in front of her smashes open, sparks flying everywhere. Ferretchucker's does the same thing.

Dante: What's going on here?

Ferretchucker: I don't know! Hammer, pull the EmCord.

She runs over to a handle on the wall with "Emergency" written on it. She pulls on it and it comes out of the wall, on a wire. Cut to a shot of the outside of the space station. A large radar dish turns, and lights round the edges start flashing. Suddenly, the dish starts rusting. Within seconds it's completely orange, and after a few more it breaks off.

Dante: Help should be on the way soon...

Hammerfan: Should we keep the shield down? The sun's behind Earth, so we should be okay.

Dante: I think so, yes. Whatever this thing is...it's dangerous.

Suddenly, without warning, the large metal shields start rising revealing the glass behind them.

Dante: Who's doing that? Ferretchucker?

Ferretchucker: Not me Sir! It's doing it on it's own! I can't stop it. The EmCord was pulled, it should be able to do that!

Dante: What are we going to do?

Hammerfan: I think I can keep up the UV shield!

She begins turning some dials and pressing buttons.

Hammerfan: FERRET! See if you can keep the power from fluctuating using the manual lever!

Ferretchucker runs to a large lever and pulls it to halfway. He begins struggling with it. Suddenly, he screams and lets go.

Dante: WHAT?!

Ferretchucker: It's red hot sir! I need some water! Quick! AHHHHH!

The skin on his hands is red and blistered. The lever he was pulling goes straight forward. Hammerfan jumps back.

Dante: What is it?

Hammerfan: The power! It's too high! If I touched that I'd be burned to a crisp! How is it still working?!

The dials begin moving and buttons pressing of their own accord. The shield is now full up. Nothing can be seen. Earth is there, but where the screen said the light was, there is nothing. Suddenly, the outer layer of glass begins rising.

Dante: SHIT! The Solar shield!

As the shield rises, now a bright light shines through.

Ferretchucker: Not just that sir...every shield on the ship.

Cut to an outer shot of the ship, with a bright white light shining on it. Cut to several shots of people staring in awe at the light. Several people suddenly collapse, including a man who was walking a corridor with a woman. Se begins screaming.

Woman: V! V!

Cut back to the control room. Dante stares at the light.

Hammerfan: Sir, Ferret! Get under the desks!

Ferret and Hammerfan dive down. Dante stares at the light. Cut to a close shot of Dante's eyes. The light is reflecting in them, and what looks like a strand of DNA is revolving in his pupils.

Hammerfan: DANTE!

Dante: Secundum.

Dante falls to the floor, unconscious. Ferret and Hammerfan crawl over to each other.

Ferretchucker: What do we do?!

The lights flicker, than turn off. They're plunged into darkness. Hammerfan's voice sounds.

Hammerfan: We pray...

Cut to an outer shot of the space station, now with no power. The light slowly dims, then fades. The space station is left, floating in the dim light that's left. Ending credits role.

Everytime you post one of these, i feel like a kid again. I can't wait untill you release a book, if that's what you choose to do. I'd buy it immediately. Genius

ferretchucker 01-06-2009 11:46 AM

Thanks for your support, it means a lot to me.

Papillon Noir 01-06-2009 12:11 PM

Yay! You're doing another story, Ferret! :) I really like the new premise. Can I be an anti-hero this time? Like a former criminal who learns to use her skills for good? ...with purple hair. :D

ferretchucker 01-06-2009 12:58 PM

Kinda like a purple hir version of this girlie then?

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...rVillain38.jpg

monalisa 01-06-2009 08:32 PM

Yay! I was hoping there'd be another one of these stories. I love this!!!!

I wanna be a gunsmith/weapons maker. I want to be honest but dreadfully sarcastic with a "don't fuck with me" attitude/reputation. My shop to be guarded by Solo, the dreaded white fluffy Planet Terror type gun-paw dog of the future.

GorePhobia 01-07-2009 12:19 AM

You can throw me in there as well if you'd like.

Papillon Noir 01-07-2009 01:45 AM

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Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 776103)
Kinda like a purple hir version of this girlie then?

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...rVillain38.jpg

You got it. ;)

roshiq 01-07-2009 06:55 AM

like to be a part of it as a part man-part machine....part good-part evil type inter galactic fighter.:)

ferretchucker 01-07-2009 07:11 AM

Yes, all of you will be included. I might do another part tonight.

Dante'sInferno 01-07-2009 02:29 PM

Can't wait to see what happens next!

newb 01-07-2009 02:41 PM

Good job.....you've really captured the essence of "newb".


though 6 girls would have been more realistic :D

hammerfan 01-07-2009 02:41 PM

Awesome, FC! You have me riveted!!

newb 01-07-2009 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by hammerfan (Post 776638)
Awesome, FC! You have me riveted!!

I thought that was my job :D

roshiq 01-07-2009 10:20 PM

Wow! Sounds like a true sci-fi epic! Please Continue...:)

Papillon Noir 01-08-2009 06:39 AM

Wow! Great start Ferret! Can't wait until the next episode! :D

ferretchucker 01-08-2009 06:56 AM

Thanks everyone! I probably won't be able to do an episode tonight, but I will tomorrow. A lot more characters should be added, but I still need more willing participation!!! I had to use Chronogrl without her permission, which I hope she doesn't mind.

bloody_ribcut 01-08-2009 12:42 PM

why not.....

The Flayed One 01-08-2009 06:12 PM

If it's not too late to jump in, I'll be a once famous space pirate who's turned into a drunk because he believe the trade has lost its purity.

CryptKeeper13 01-08-2009 07:17 PM

Can I be the asshole that everyone hates and then dies horrifically?

bloody_ribcut 01-09-2009 06:15 AM

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Originally Posted by bloody_ribcut (Post 777213)
why not.....

i'll be the space pothead..

Dante'sInferno 01-09-2009 06:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bloody_ribcut (Post 777693)
i'll be the space pothead..

.............:D

ferretchucker 01-09-2009 06:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bloody_ribcut (Post 777693)
i'll be the space pothead..

I said describe what your character will be like, not what you're already like! :D

Freak 01-09-2009 03:08 PM

That was awesome dude.Can't wait for the next part.

ChronoGrl 01-09-2009 03:52 PM

OH - What will happen to Chrono?! :eek:

Lots of fun, Gabe!

Dante'sInferno 01-09-2009 05:15 PM

Get's better and better! :D


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