OMG! I love it! I haven't been on all week (busy with work and my dad, he's doing MUCH better,YAY!). But I just caught up to 9/14, and I love my character! Thank you Ferret and Dante! I'm still giggling about "... A small, white, fluffy dog walks up to her and jumps onto her lap. She begins stroking it."

Now I must read about Chrono's kitty!

This is SO much fun to read!

Now I'm laughing even harder! I don't know which I like better...

V: Same to you Gore. Honestly, this town is nuttier than a squirrels dream.

Or

Chronogrl: Who's a good little creature? YOU ARE!


Funny and creepy, great combo! Keep it coming FC!

Thanks guys. And sure Phantom Stranger, you can be in it.

Tonights episode will follow Gore, just after V left. We will also find out the mysterious person who has been mentioned. The one who V has been tasked to kill and is giving power to the creatures.

I never knew. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) :D

Keep up the great work FC!

Wow! I love my intro:) .

Great going, FC!

Yeh, when I proof read it I noticed that but i decided not to change it.

Keep up the great work FC!

Really great!

Pretty prime stuff. Your pacing and sense of suspense are getting really strong.

thanks. I really appreciate all comments. They're what keep me going.