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horrorzack 09-14-2011 05:19 AM

Ooooh. This is interesting :D. I have my subject I just need to write it out.

Doc Faustus 09-14-2011 09:23 AM

If any of you bring up quick brown foxes and lazy yellow dogs, heads will roll.

roshiq 09-14-2011 12:17 PM

Not good in writing stories...but I'll give a try just to stay in the competition...:(

Btw, do we need to use those "A to Z" words in alphabetical order or randomly as just where it fits?

The Villain 09-14-2011 02:17 PM

Damn why couldn't i have gotten this one!!!

_____V_____ 09-15-2011 05:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by roshiq (Post 904071)
Not good in writing stories...but I'll give a try just to stay in the competition...:(

Btw, do we need to use those "A to Z" words in alphabetical order or randomly as just where it fits?

I think you will do wonderfully well, Rosh. ;)

Not necessarily in alphabetical order. They can be anywhere in your story - just remember that you have to use at least ONE word for each letter of the alphabet in your story.

(the toughies will be the Q-word and the X-word, if you know what I mean) :D

ChronoGrl 09-15-2011 06:19 AM

Very cool challenge... Tough, but cool - Thought about it a lot last night - I actually have a concept - Kinda wish this was for the Goblins. Can't wait to see what you guys come up with.

ferretchucker 09-15-2011 01:24 PM

Oooh, a challenge like this would be perfect! Lucky Ogres!


Now, this is a sidenote for which I thought it wasn't worth reviving the original Idol thread.

Neverending, I recall a remake challenge last year where I suggested a Jaws remake (not that I agreed with it, and I wouldn't pick that film again in a million years. It was a bad choice) HOWEVER, what I did suggest was Bill Pullman for the part of Quint. You weren't sure about that casting and instead suggested Harvey Keitel. Now, that was an equally fine choice, and I do not say this out of bitterness, just that I feel it is relevant. If EVER there were proof that Bill Pullman is a fine, under appreciated actor capable of playing an excellent variety of characters, it is Torchwood: Miracle Day.

Not sure how big it was in the US, but I've always loved Torchwood, and I know this new series was shown on a channel called Starz. Pullman plays a character who is the definition of unsettling. Slight twitches and mannerisms allow you to fear and despise him without him even uttering a word. Again, this is not a "FUCK YOU, NEV, I WAS RIGHT". (I'm petty, but not THAT petty :D ) Just that I felt Pullman needed a big-up ;)

roshiq 09-16-2011 11:10 AM

Today after lunch, I made an attempt to write a story after quite a long time. Whether anyone take it as an excuse or whatever but the truth is I've never actually succeed in writing down a whole story (of my original idea) before...even in my first language/mother tongue--Bangla. And that frustrated not only me but also my friends here as they always been a great listeners to my 'ideas & plots'. Anyway, after writing the first paragraph of my story I recalled that there's a limitation of using only about 200 words in the challenge along with the "A to Z" ground rule. Then I looked down at the bottom of my word sheet and it says near about 300 words and that just for a paragraph when the main events were still long away from happening.

Anyway, I'm pretty glad right now that I've finally able to done it. I don't care whatever crap it turned out but at least satisfied knowing that at last I've finished writing down a story through a good challenge.

I'll send it to V, very soon.:)

newb 09-16-2011 03:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by roshiq (Post 904206)
Today after lunch, I made an attempt to write a story after quite a long time. Whether anyone take it as an excuse or whatever but the truth is I've never actually succeed in writing down a whole story (of my original idea) before...even in my first language/mother tongue--Bangla. And that frustrated not only me but also my friends here as they always been a great listeners to my 'ideas & plots'. Anyway, after writing the first paragraph of my story I recalled that there's a limitation of using only about 200 words in the challenge along with the "A to Z" ground rule. Then I looked down at the bottom of my word sheet and it says near about 300 words and that just for a paragraph when the main events were still long away from happening.

Anyway, I'm pretty glad right now that I've finally able to done it. I don't care whatever crap it turned out but at least satisfied knowing that at last I've finished writing down a story through a good challenge.

I'll send it to V, very soon.:)

see......this forum can be very inspiring........WTG Rosh

_____V_____ 09-16-2011 09:35 PM

UPDATE

And we are into the final 24 hours for the Ogres, and I have received ONE entry so far...

...which has been duly forwarded to the Judges.

Your Honors, please check your PMs.

neverending 09-16-2011 09:43 PM

As always, I work weekends. Can't get to this till next week.

hammerfan 09-17-2011 02:15 AM

I won't be able to get to it til tomorrow

ChronoGrl 09-17-2011 04:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by roshiq (Post 904206)
Today after lunch, I made an attempt to write a story after quite a long time. Whether anyone take it as an excuse or whatever but the truth is I've never actually succeed in writing down a whole story (of my original idea) before...even in my first language/mother tongue--Bangla. And that frustrated not only me but also my friends here as they always been a great listeners to my 'ideas & plots'. Anyway, after writing the first paragraph of my story I recalled that there's a limitation of using only about 200 words in the challenge along with the "A to Z" ground rule. Then I looked down at the bottom of my word sheet and it says near about 300 words and that just for a paragraph when the main events were still long away from happening.

Anyway, I'm pretty glad right now that I've finally able to done it. I don't care whatever crap it turned out but at least satisfied knowing that at last I've finished writing down a story through a good challenge.

I'll send it to V, very soon.:)

Well, that's awesome Roshiq! That's actually a huge accomplishment. Can't wait to read it.


Zero - Glad to see you back. Ripley won't stop talking about you. ;)

Zero 09-17-2011 05:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 904266)
Zero - Glad to see you back. Ripley won't stop talking about you. ;)

Hi to Ripley!!

_____V_____ 09-17-2011 08:38 PM

UPDATE

And we are into the LAST 90 minutes till the deadline for the Ogres, and I have sent in the SECOND entry by a Ogre to the Judges.

Your Honors, please check your PMs.

3 Ogres are STILL absent - Zombieness, Leezuki & Horrorzack.

Will they be able to dash in within the deadline?

_____V_____ 09-17-2011 11:22 PM

And so the Deadline ticks over!

3 Ogres are marked as absent for this Second Test.

I now await the verdicts, after which the entries and their Grades will be posted.

hammerfan 09-20-2011 10:16 AM

Where do we stand on this?

_____V_____ 09-20-2011 10:22 AM

Still waiting on one more Judge to turn in their verdicts. Once they are in, the entries and the grades will be up.

hammerfan 09-20-2011 10:25 AM

OK, thanks V.

_____V_____ 09-20-2011 09:09 PM

THE SECOND TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE OGRES


Write a short horror story in about 200 words, using words starting from A to Z in the story (at least once). Please note that no alphabet should be left out.


Roshiq's entry -

Quote:

The Town Where Death Comes Slowly


"Many Years ago there’s an Indian family moved into this small town of Zanesfield, Ohio. After some weird incidents of death beginning to occur around them, the town folks started to blame them for practicing some sort of black magic. They burned their house down and that killed every one of them. But that just unleashed a terrible curse that every generation of inhabitants lived from that time has no escape from it.”

Dr. Boris then stops for a moment. Xavier was listening, sitting in a sofa, looking tired & shocked.

"And the curse is here human death comes quietly, with fantastic symptoms." Dr. Boris continues. "At first, people just start to notice you less as if you don’t exist anymore. Next you'll lose your shadows in broad daylight. Then your images will starts to disappear from everything, people captured & stored. And finally you'll lose reflection in the mirror. Many tried to get rid of it, even by moving into other towns but none succeed. It's like one of those rare, pathetic diseases where you know you're going to die soon but nothing can help you out."

Xavier stops the video, picks the hand mirror & sees...yup, he's fading.


Judge #1's verdict -

Quote:

I give roshiq a B-.

I enjoyed the story, and actually wanted more. I found myself wishing it was a novel.

Judge #2's verdict -

Quote:

You used every letter, as instructed, and you came in at 199 words. You fulfilled the requirements of the assignment. You also crafted a complete story - beginning, middle and end. Despite some minor language issues, you did a good job.

GRADE: B

Judge #3's verdict -

Quote:

I respect that this is the first time you've written a story in English, but, I don't feel right factoring that into my score. Publishers and producers wouldn't take that into consideration and neither will I. Fairly creative, but there's a lot of awkward usage and you've gotta grade writing on writing.

C-

Overall Grade - C+

_____V_____ 09-20-2011 09:15 PM

Despare's entry -

Quote:

Anne was born clairvoyant but on this day she could see something new... damnation was expected to be brought down upon her because she was soon to be found out. You see, God hates invokers, psychics, and the such so for her to stay safe from the elders she'll just have keep lying and she must not predict the future for anybody. Questions came to her from her friends in the village like never before, it was as if a neon sign was hovering above her that read "Psychic" and suspicious eyes fell on her with the weight of bricks. "Run and save yourself tonight!" A voice inside her yelled, vexing her in a way she couldn't explain. This puritan village was full of xenophobes and closed-minded fools who couldn't deal with a gift like hers. She'd have to leave, take her zebu and try to make it over the undulating hills of sand that stood between her and... someplace else. It would be an ordeal but she had to leave tonight. It didn't matter where she ended up living, as long as she indeed ended up living.

Judge #1's verdict -

Quote:

I give Despare a B.

I really like this story, and it has a good flow to it.

Judge #2's verdict -

Quote:

You used every letter, as instructed, and you came in at 188 words. You fulfilled those instructions. However, the assignment was to write a story. Despite excellent descriptive skills, this isn't a story. It's only the setup. There's no resolution. Since the instructions stated to write a story "around 200 words" there's no excuse for come in at such a low word count and not offer us a complete story.

GRADE: B-

Judge #3's verdict -

Quote:

That was indeed a thing you turned in.

For using the word zebu, I'm going to up your grade to a C.


Overall Grade - B-

_____V_____ 09-20-2011 09:42 PM

THE SECOND TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE GOBLINS


I am here to address the Goblins. Each one of you will be given a task which you have to perform to the best of your ability, wit and intellect, based upon the knowledge you have of the genre.

For this first task, the common theme I have chosen is - VINTAGE LIMERICKS.

Here is your task, Goblins -

Write an effective limerick based on any vintage horror movie of your choice. (vintage = pre-Romero's Night of the Living Dead era)

Your limerick must capture the essence of the movie.

(limerick = 5-line meter in the rhyme scheme of a-a-b-b-a)


Goblins - The Return, Nightmare of Death, Ferretchucker, The Villain and Chronogrl - put your thinking caps on and get to work.

Once you are finished, please PM your entry to me, or send it via email to [email protected]. Do NOT post your entry directly in this thread.

You all have 96 hours, starting from NOW! All the best!

ChronoGrl 09-21-2011 10:17 AM

Very cool entries from Despare and Roshiq... Roshiq, congrats on your first English language story!

That was a tough challenge, though I think I'd prefer it to our limerick. ;)


Now, according to my calculates...

96 hours should = Sunday, September 25th at 1:42 a.m. EST. Please let me know if I'm off.

I'ma gonna go ruminate on this now. :D

hammerfan 09-21-2011 10:20 AM

If The Goblins don't get their submissions in before Friday at 5:00 pm eastern time, you'll have to wait until some time on Monday for my grade. I'm going to Washington, DC for the weekend.

roshiq 09-21-2011 11:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 904697)
Very cool entries from Despare and Roshiq... Roshiq, congrats on your first English language story!

Thank you:)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Judge #1 (Post 904697)

I enjoyed the story, and actually wanted more. I found myself wishing it was a novel.

Actually initially I thought about it like that in a broad set up with lots of characters & few sub plots but that was years ago and later lost the interest as I've always being a very lazy "writer" with poor/wrong choice of words. :o

The Villain 09-21-2011 02:20 PM

Well at least this one won't take me as long as the other one.

The Villain 09-22-2011 03:05 PM

Having a harder time with this then i thought. When i write, i like to write a lot so limiting myself to five lines is really hard.

It's also hard trying to capture the essence of the movie while also making it funny. That seems contradictory to me. At least i have a lot of time.

_____V_____ 09-22-2011 09:45 PM

UPDATE

48 hours have passed, and no entries in so far.

ChronoGrl 09-23-2011 06:13 PM

Mine's in. :D:cool:

The Villain 09-23-2011 06:15 PM

As is mine. Do you think anyone else is gonna do one this time Chrono or is is just going to be me versus you for the final? :D

_____V_____ 09-23-2011 09:51 PM

UPDATE


Received TWO entries from the Goblins - one via PM and one via email - and promptly forwarded them to the Judges.

Still waiting on THREE more Goblins. 24 hours left till the deadline expires.

ChronoGrl 09-24-2011 05:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Villain (Post 904816)
As is mine. Do you think anyone else is gonna do one this time Chrono or is is just going to be me versus you for the final? :D

I wouldn't mind some more competition, but let's face it - It's not like they could compete with US anyway. ;)

Can't wait to see your limerick - Good luck!

The Villain 09-24-2011 06:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 904840)
I wouldn't mind some more competition, but let's face it - It's not like they could compete with US anyway. ;)

Can't wait to see your limerick - Good luck!

Yeah were awesome :D

I'm excited to see yours as well. Good luck to you too.

_____V_____ 09-24-2011 10:00 AM

UPDATE


Less than 12 hours remain till the Deadline, and I still wait to receive from THREE more Goblins.

_____V_____ 09-25-2011 12:28 AM

And so the Deadline for the Goblins ticks over.

I now request all Judges to send me their Grades, after which the entries will be posted.

ferretchucker 09-25-2011 01:41 PM

Again, I apologise. This week I've been SWAMPED. Was on the other side of the country on Wedneday, has College and then assisting with a parent's evening for a lower year in the evening, after which I had to make a curry for some Danish exchange visitors to the school. They came on Friday, which again, I had to stay late into the evening to assist with their stay. By the time I got home it was 11 and I had to be up for work at 6:00am, which I didn't finish until 3:00pm. THEN I was out at an 18th birthday party, then I was up for work at 5:00am today.

In short - my week has been fully booked :(

_____V_____ 09-26-2011 05:01 AM

THE SECOND TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE GOBLINS


Write an effective limerick based on any vintage horror movie of your choice. (vintage = pre-Romero's Night of the Living Dead era)

Your limerick must capture the essence of the movie.

(limerick = 5-line meter in the rhyme scheme of a-a-b-b-a)



Chronogrl's entry -

Quote:

For this challenge I chose The Incredible Shrinking Man (1957) - This is a film that is near and dear to my heart and when I think of "classic horror" as well as "films that introduced me to the genre," this is certainly one of them. It was one of my dad's favorite movies, and I would watch it with him over and over again... But what really sticks with me about this film isn't necessarily the nostalgia value - It always struck me, even as a young girl, as an incredibly and profoundly sad and hopeless tale - Here is a story of loneliness, of isolation, of literally being diminished to the point of irrelevance - Becoming smaller in (overwhelmed by) a world that cannot help or that does not care... This literal and figurative sense of being absolutely and uncontrollably overwhelmed by the world is the essence that I wanted to capture in my limerick:

Radiation has taken its toll
This shrinking I cannot control
It's not just that I'm tiny;
All my hopes have been stymied -
The world has swallowed me whole


Judge #1's verdict -

Quote:

A very good effort. Good rhythm. I would transpose the first two lines- introduce the character and the problem first, and the cause second.

Grade B

Judge #2's verdict -

Quote:

Inspired. Understands the point, captures the tone to a certain extent. Keep working and growing.

B

Judge #3's verdict -

Quote:

I give Chrono a B.

I like the fact that Chrono gave a little background as to why she chose that particular movie.

OVERALL GRADE - B.




The Villain's entry -

Quote:

A bomb was dropped
and a giant lizard popped
out of the ocean floor
to let out a roar
that said Godzilla cannot be stopped


Judge #1's verdict -

Quote:

The rhythm is off. The first 2 lines should match, in length. If you changed the first line to read "A bomb on Tokyo was dropped" it would scan better.

Grade C.

Judge #2's verdict -

Quote:

Arrhythmic. Doesn't really convey the feel of the movie, which is dead serious. Disappointing. But, I'm going to reward you with a higher grade for having the courtesy to submit something.

Villain, you get a C.

Judge #3's verdict -

Quote:

I give Villain a C.

OVERALL GRADE - C

_____V_____ 09-26-2011 05:10 AM

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT


For all the absentees of HDC Idol II so far,


Ogres -

Leezuki,

Horrorzack, and

Zombieness. (disappeared after the 1st Test)


Goblins -

The Return,

Nightmare of Death, and

Ferretchucker.


Our esteemed Judge #2 has something to say to all of you -

Quote:

All the rest of you have excuses and have things to occupy your time.

And that's fine. It's only a game.

But I'm editing a three hundred page book, preparing for a writing workshop and writing a bunch of things at once and I'm giving my time to encourage and help people that want to become better writers. If any of them are here.

Next time, I'd like HDC to give me a reason to devote my energy to this.


So, if any of you absentees are reading this thread, please start participating from the next Test onwards. If you confirmed your participation in the teaser thread, it is your duty to do so.

ChronoGrl 09-26-2011 05:45 AM

Man - What does it take to pull out an A? Or even a B+? I was pretty damn proud of my entry. :mad:

I actually disagree with Judge #1 re transposing the lines - I feel as though "Radiation has taken its toll" would grab the Reader more than "The shrinking I cannot control;" I think that it's something that would make me want to read on - Introducing the "shrinking" first might be silly...

Regardless, thanks again to the judges who are putting their time in review and consideration.

_____V_____ 09-26-2011 11:13 AM

THE THIRD TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE OGRES


I am here to address the Ogres. Each one of you will be given a task which you have to perform to the best of your ability, wit and intellect, based upon the knowledge you have of the genre.

I will take this chance and request the absent Ogres - Horrorzack, Leezuki & Zombieness - to give an effort in this Test.

For this task, the common theme I have chosen is - HORROR DIRECTORS.

Here is your task, Ogres -

Think of a suitable and unique outline for a script, to be turned into a movie adaptation by any of these 5 renowned directors :-

Terence Fisher, James Whale, Brian De Palma, Tod Browning, William Castle.


Ogres - Despare, Roshiq, Zombieness, Horrorzack and Leezuki - put your thinking caps on and get to work.

You may research your chosen director's works, study their films, and frame your scripts according to their style of film-making. Remember, the script/film MUST be unique.

Once you are finished, please PM your entry to me, or send it via email to [email protected]. Do NOT post your entry directly in this thread.

You all have 96 hours, starting from NOW! All the best!


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