I liked that bit too!

Nice ones FC, Sorry I wasn't around to read them earlier but I did now. :)

Good to hear.

Everybody else enjoying them?

Absolutely! Sorry I was quiet today - I ended up leaving work with a migraine.

I really like em FC...like it more if i'm in it again:)


Just kidding:)

Who aren't enjoying this fast paced, action packed gruesome story? More & more awesomeness in every episodes!:)

You're getting extremely good at placing your cliffhangers. Good work.

Good chapter!

Nice episode, though I'm kinda confused about the storyline cause at one point it left off with my charactor getting introduced into it and it was all creepy and such and then bam drunken bar fun. Not complaining mind you, just... constructive criticism? Though i could be missing something.

Yeh, that was a mistake on my part. I wrote the episode last night without thinking. I had to try and recover it with this by saying that the mission would happen that day instead. Although I have thought of somethings (some which won't be revealed until the end of the series) which do fit better now. Don't worry, tomorrow, you will get your big starring role!

You can always seek out the Retconomicon.

Ha! That was actually pretty good!

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

Good stuff,like always:)

Good stuff buddy:)

Man.... I'm always made out to be stupid...lol

Nice one though Ferret. :)

Not stupid, just...not as advanced in the vocabulary department. Remember, you can speak to dragons.

Yeah true, but I swear, I thought the next words coming out of my mouth were gonna be "Baby RUth!" or "I love you chunk!"

Amazing!I love each episode more and more!

You just wait until I get in here! There will be awesome abound!

hahahaha. oh dear christ I love you! Amazing. you dont even know how hard I just laughed.

Yes I do, I watched you through the window.... I mean.... ignore the man in the bushes!

http://www.nerve.com/CS/blogs/scanne...15/peeping.jpg

Nice episode there FC. Keep it up.

I will try. And the next episode will ALSO be set on that night. This time, from the point of Monalisa and also the creatures.

Its really good,i just want to keep reading.

This is so cool. You have one hell of a talent

Thanks everyone, you can't imagine how much all of this support means to me.

Nice job! Looking forward to the next few episodes.

Badass!I can't wait to read the next episodes!

Keep it up FC. You're doing a good job dude.

Wow, you've been busy this weekend, Ferret! Great job! Looking forward to the finale! :)

Thanks. I've been trying to cram loads of episodes in lately so that I get the Halloween deadline. Dunno if I'll make it though.

Glad to know you're reading though. And if anyone else is who doesn't make comments often, PLEASE DO! I like to know who my readers are.

P.S - The next episode will be centred around Crabapple.

I haven't wanted it to stop!

This looks like trouble.

Getting more and more amazing!:D

Crabapple has to be my favorite charactor.... I was laughing this entire..... episode? I dunno what to call it.

Dear god this is getting awesome.I love where it's going!

Truly fantastic, FC - and I love the part with Crabapple! Too funny!

Yep, I'd call it an episode. ;)


And thanks everyone else!

YES!! COOL!! I have a hook! I"m loving this story.