errm^ that's weird.

scaryminda15
 

i am back to share another loving peom with u all....


You said you would never leave me
but dont you see
that you cant say the word never
i thought we would be together forever
but i see i was terribly wrong
the days seem so long
and the end of the year feels so slow
like your life is feeling like an eternity low
but you said that we would be together to the end of time
of course love is like a sour lime
but i must stop the pain
i walk in the rain
without an umbrella to cover me
i lost my sight of caring for free
someone just took my baby away from me
but how can i get my love back for eternity


ok what do you wonderful people think?

Re: scaryminda15
 

Baby, baby, baby............. No comments. :cool:

Don´t take it personal. I´m just not much of a talker.:)

scaryminda15
 

Angra was it bad or not. no comments is for scardy cats. loljk.

Re: scaryminda15
 

It was better.

Your poems just seems more like song lyrics than poems to me.

But what the hell do I know about poems?:rolleyes:

Sinister Brainwashing
Unbatised Mind
Killers in the passage
Delight in default.

Reset Regret

Time out

By the way no one's filled the hat yet

I always liked the one from Dead Poets Society called 'Ode to my Goldfish'

Oh, wet pet.

Burntout Headbang
War with itself
Can you see
the
calling

?

Severed perception
Solo slam dance
turns the spike