OMG! I love it! I haven't been on all week (busy with work and my dad, he's doing MUCH better,YAY!). But I just caught up to 9/14, and I love my character! Thank you Ferret and Dante! I'm still giggling about "... A small, white, fluffy dog walks up to her and jumps onto her lap. She begins stroking it."

Now I must read about Chrono's kitty!

This is SO much fun to read!

Now I'm laughing even harder! I don't know which I like better...

V: Same to you Gore. Honestly, this town is nuttier than a squirrels dream.

Or

Chronogrl: Who's a good little creature? YOU ARE!


Funny and creepy, great combo! Keep it coming FC!

Thanks guys. And sure Phantom Stranger, you can be in it.

Tonights episode will follow Gore, just after V left. We will also find out the mysterious person who has been mentioned. The one who V has been tasked to kill and is giving power to the creatures.

I never knew. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) :D

Keep up the great work FC!

Wow! I love my intro:) .

Great going, FC!

Yeh, when I proof read it I noticed that but i decided not to change it.

Keep up the great work FC!

Really great!

Pretty prime stuff. Your pacing and sense of suspense are getting really strong.

thanks. I really appreciate all comments. They're what keep me going.

Man, you just keep making me more badass by the day - I love it!!


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Oh yeah, and the parts with the other people are pretty good too, I guess...;) :p

This is so cool.

Great job so far FC.I hope I get a little more action later on.

Oh you wait, I have BIG things planned for you!

Sorry guys, but as I'm going to egypt, I shan't be posting another episode until NEXT SATURDAY! Once again, sorry.

Not a single reply?

:(

I literally just read it. I'm glad to see you're still working on this. The story is coming along great. I'm sure everyone is looking forward to how this will turn out, especially those of us who are in it. :)

I am!I can't wait untill it's finished!

You just carry on FC! I'm sure everyone here is glad to be a part of this amazing story! I'm loving it!:)

It is an awesome horror soap...it is like the new Dark Shadows or something!

It's great!I'm loving the build-up.:D

Yes, and remember, Crabapple's cameo was not enough. He needs to come back with more of his apple orchard wisdom. :rolleyes:

Remember what I said, each HDC based character should hopefully get their own episode.

Yes yes! Yes, yes. That exciting :D

Continue please..:)

Was my character approved?

I can't remember? Have you been in it yet?


Everyone who hasn't been in it and wants to be just leave a coment, I'll write you into tomorrow's episode.

Not as of yet. I'd like to be a well-intentioned, generally helpful alchemist who's interested in raising the dead to bring back his deceased wife but does not see how necromancy is inappropriate and dangerous.

That could fit in well...

I'd like to be in it as well. I'll pm you.

Sure. That's fine. I'll write you all in.

Oh, and fortunato, I know you asked to be in. You're gonna be introduced soon.

Pm sent, send me one back and tell me what you think.

ah, excellent! i've been reading along, so i can't wait.

I've spent most of the afternoon getting caught up. I can't believe how far behind I got!

FC, this is awesome! I love that you put Chrono's cat in it! Excellent! :D Chrono and I are sisters :D

Nice episode, Ferret. :)

Thanks Hammerfan and Paps.

Hammer: Yep! And you're the smart one!

Paps (yes, I still say paps): Thanks. And don't worry, you will be back!

Good cliffhanger.

Amazing!I love where this is going!:D

If it's not too late, fit me in too. I'd prefer to be a drunken ex-maniacal bastard who's too depressed to do anything evil because he doesn't think evil is pure anymore.

If not, I'll take what I can get.

Yay! :D I was going to ask you if I was going to make another appearance :)


LOL :p