Originally Posted by urgeok2 (Post 744706)

i had to edit myself about 12 times on this one.

best not to say anything.

must not type

Originally Posted by neverending (Post 744686)

Guess it's my turn.

This is my night.
A night of unknown creatures
Lurking in the shadows,
And darkness the monarch.
For one night at least.

This is my time.
The time between times.
And those who journey forth
See things others cannot.
For a while, at least.

Dark figures do battle
In the eternal war
Greater than humankind
Would ever dare to dream.
I am one who fights.
Awake to the war
Most have no inkling of.

These are my friends.
The few who feel the same as I.
Alive for a night,
And merely watching other nights pass by.

This is my feeling
On the Hallowed Eve.
Each time it touches Earth,
I live again.


http://www.neverendingwonder.com/time.txt

Originally Posted by The Flayed One (Post 745192)

Thanks, hon. It's a very sloppy WIP right now, I'm afraid. One day I'll turn it into an illustrated childrens novel, I swear:D

Originally Posted by fortunato (Post 745203)

holy smokes, flayed! i was thinking the exact same thing reading your poems:
"this would make a really good illustrated story."
seriously, if you ever get it made, be sure to let me know cause i'm buying one

Originally Posted by The Flayed One (Post 745230)

Thanks, Doc. That means a lot coming from a published writer. I'm very lethargic in submitting my material, and I get down on myself for it. I have a story hanging around down in the Horror Fiction section which I wrote to submit. I ended up only submitting it once, and I have no excuse but laziness. What I really need is a fire under my ass because I haven't been paid or won anything for writing in almost ten years.

Originally Posted by Despare (Post 745232)

That one you just posted has been around for a while hasn't it?

Originally Posted by neverending (Post 745233)

Fortunato is not Doc, and to my best of knowledge, is not a published writer- though he might be.

Originally Posted by The Flayed One (Post 745235)

Do you mean the poems, or the story "I Love You?"

Originally Posted by Despare (Post 745240)

The Twystyes one, but I did a search and found my answer.


Flayed and Eaten

Childrens book (demented) - 04-21-2006, 07:22 AM
Dr. Twystye's Secret Goblin Potion

Originally Posted by The Flayed One (Post 745243)

Yeah, it's actually went through constant updates for almost eight years. I never seem to be able to find an artist who is willing to commit, so like Xanadu, my work remains unfinished, possibly for eternity.:o