I like the way i ended it. I will report to this thread on Wednesday when i can print off the whole story.

Read this shit (Dante) ...i have the rest finished but i have to find out a way to get it home to type it out to you guys'es.

Ha kick ass story man u could be a writer the broken glass shit was esquisate heh :D i give it 2 thumbs up!







o yeah u can tell everybody that death scene for my movie if u want to and we can see what they think hah.:D

Cool story
 

I usually don't like this kind of thing, but I totally dug your story. It was freaky!