This story was pretty cool. It kind of reminded me of something that would air on The Twilight Zone. By the middle of the story, Rod Serling was reading it in my head.:)

Thats what I was going for man, so no offence taken at all. I didnt want to make everything perfectly clear.

It was kind of cool...I originall wrote this story for a school project. For bonus marks, we were aloud to read our stories in front of the class. Well being the actor that I am, I naturally toook that oportunity. The cool part is that after class people came up to me with theories and ideas that Id never even thought of...really cool, at least I thought so.

Anything that makes one think, because creativity is what it's all about.

I have so much stuff of my own, but I'm still learning the craft of writing.
I have wrote since I was 16. Only recently, I have been serious about it, though.

Please do, pretty good stuff.

I did post one other, Eyes of the Forest. I'll bump it, though I personally dont think it's anywhere near as good as this one.

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Felt like bumping the stories Ive posted. Ive written a couple more, will post some soon.

good stuff. keep it up.:)

Enjoyed this, keep them coming :)