i think it would be better if u saved the haircut surprise till the end

as in, u make it sound like something real shitty is abou to happen, then it turns out its just a fuckin haircut

kapiche? capeesh?

ya that would be funny. I'm not very good at writing stories. btw this is my first horror story. except for the exception of a few telly tuby cult stories. I could post those itf you want.

i think it takes alot to even come up with somet hing!

as for ur writing, that can be honed as u go. first u write, then afterward is when u go through and fix it up

post whatever u want!!! :)

thnx 4 ur support:D you can read my telly tubby exploitation thread in the general discussion. is up now.

Well your awfully pretty :D